The Chocolate War
by
Robert Cormier
Summary:
Jerry Renault has just lost his mother
to cancer and is beginning his freshman year at Trinity school, an all
boys Catholic school. He is trying out for the football team.
The Assistant Head Master of Trinity, Brother Leon, has doubled
the quota and selling price of the annual chocolate sale, designed to raise
money for the school. He asks Archie Costello, an important member of The
Vigils, an underground but very influential student organization, to assist in
the sale. Archie is concerned about his grade in Leon’s class, so he agrees.
Archie’s job as the "Assigner" for The Vigils is to pick
students to perform absurd tasks. Because the group is so powerful everyone
always does what The Vigils demand. Archie chooses Jerry Renault for an
assignment refusing to sell chocolates for ten days. The Vigils have a black
box which holds five white marbles and one black marble. Archie must choose a
marble after each assignment. If he chooses the black marble, he must perform
the task himself. He has never chosen black.
After ten days of refusing to sell chocolates Jerry continues to
refuse because he does not agree with the sale, which is supposedly voluntary.
His actions inspire other students to do the same, as most students never
wanted to sell the chocolates to begin with. Sales are doing very poorly and
Leon says that Archie better do something about it because he promised the
support of The Vigils.
Archie and The Vigils transform the chocolate sale into something
popular in the school and soon everyone becomes involved. Archie secretly
terrorizes Jerry by calling him at all hours and laughing on the phone. He then
makes Emile Janza call Jerry queer and beat him up. Emile brought some friends
with him to hurt Jerry as well. Jerry is hurt very badly after the fight.
Archie calls Jerry
and tells him there is a way he can get even with Emile and that he should come
to the football field that night. When Jerry arrives, the entire school has
also come. They are told there will be a fight between Emile and Jerry. Archie
is selling raffle tickets: each boy gets to write how they want Emile or Jerry
to hit the other, the winning shot gets one hundred dollars and fifty boxes of chocolate.
Before the fight Obie, another Vigil who hates Archie, decides
that Archie must draw two marbles from the box. Archie is mad but agrees. He
draws two white marbles and is safe. The fight begins and the participants
follow the instructions. Then a card is read that should have been declared
illegal: a low punch to the groin for Jerry. Without thinking Emile attacks
Jerry’s groin, as Jerry tries to defend himself the crowd is worked into a
frenzy. Emile and Jerry fight freely. Jerry is badly, badly hurt.
The lights go out, but not before Obie sees Brother Leon watching
from outside--Archie tipped off Leon, thinking he would enjoy the fight. Archie
goes to investigate the lighting situation and finds Brother Jacques has turned
out the lights to end the fight. As Jacques yells at Archie, Brother Leon comes
to his rescue saying that boys will be boys.
As they wait for the ambulance, The Goober (Jerry’s friend) holds
Jerry and tries to comfort him. Jerry tells The Goober to do whatever he is
told and to never stand up for himself because it is not worth it.
Later, Archie and
Obie discuss the events. Obie tells Archie that he will get his one day-that
maybe the black box will work, or he will meet another kid like Reynolds.
Evaluation by genre:
This story is Contemporary
fiction because this story could actually happen I know people whom have went
through similar issues as the character did in this story. The characters seem
very real. I actually would not have none
this was actually fiction if the book didn't tell me.
Motivational
Activities:
·
Retell the story in your own word
· Make out a short play acting out this
story
· Quote one of your favorite lines from
the book
· Compare some of the problems with
situations at their own school and make inferences about your own lives and
families.
· Demonstrate your understanding of texts
on four levels: factual, interpretive, critical, and persona
Reader Response Questions:
1. What is the tone of the book so far? Think about the first sentence of
the book why did the author use it?
2.
How would you define
Jerry as a character?
3.
Who are Obie and
Archie?
4.
What does this story
have to do with chocolate? Why is the title chocolate war?
Personal Comments:
This story highlights the
fact that sometimes life is not fair and that people sometimes find themselves
in situations that they cannot control. All the characters have flaws and many
are outright mean. Brother Leon and Archie are very much alike. They are
controlling, manipulative, self-centered, and cold hearted. This book, deals with life's cruelty,
and deals with complex issues with intensity. Evil in all its ugliness pervades
the story, which Robert Cormier sets in a private Catholic school, presenting
evil as something that can invade even our own protected lives. The overall setting of
the Chocolate War is vague so the reader can easily imagine that it can take
place anywhere and at any time. The book has a great plot but at some parts are
a bit “down” and depressing. The main and minor characters are described in
detail and you can really feel like you know them. Their connections and
interactions are clear and help to build the story and move it along.
Unfortunately the book is a bit confusing at times. The writing is simple but
there are a lot of descriptions and people to remember.
Only a few
villains cause all the mayhem, and the book exposes them early. However,
Cormier won't spare us from life's nasty truths. Readers might wonder,
"Would any of us have done better, or would we make the same easy
compromises as Cormier's characters?" For that reason, this book remains
relevant: It forces readers to face the reality of evil, and examine how to
confront it.
Biographic
Info:
Cormier, Robert. The Chocolate War. New York: Alfred A Knopf, 1974.